The Zorg Chronicles

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I had an idea the other day....I'm sure most of you know that I write. I thought, "What if the stories within the game became a bit deeper :think: ? How do you lose or win a battle? What stories would your people have, your pilots, your leaders?"

I put together a few short stories. I'll post one or two every few days. They're short enough to be interesting, but long enough to get you involved with the characters. I hope you enjoy this insight of what it might actually be like in the universe of Zorg. :)


Her

Colors zoomed around the cockpit of Arroe’s fighter, The Pilgrim. He wasn’t sure why his team fought against the planet so. Arroe didn’t fight for resources, power, ships, or people. He fought for “her”. She was so beautiful, so welcoming. Arroe longed to see “her”. Caught in the current skirmish, Arroe struggled to sway his ship through the forest of lasers and bullets shot by both the defending planet and his own fleet.
His commander came over the speaker in his ear. It was annoying to hear his orders. The formation was to be changed to another area of the system to flank the planet from a different angle. The Pilgrim wondered tired among the stars. Although the distant explosions rang through the metal of the fighter, the memory of the commander’s bloodthirsty orders still screeched in resonance in Aroe’s thoughts.
The titled “enemy” planet was not his enemy, but without the complete obedience to his fleet, he would be detained forever, unable to see “her”. So he fought, not his hardest, but enough to do his part. He chose his targets specifically to be non-biological, for he did not believe in the death of living things for any purpose. To kill would be an insult to life, a beautiful creation and a gift, not in his right to deny its existence.
Only hours later did he see the fall of the innocent planet before him. Its holes spat fire and smoke just as its killers did from their guns. They fought for glory, but Arroe fought for “her”. On the return home he took a long route through the outer rim of the galaxy – full of vibrant clouds and stars against the dark, empty background. This is why he was here, why he became a pilot. This was his love – the universe.


He fought for her. She was so beautiful, so welcoming, and Arroe had longed to see her.


Inspiration: Recent Personification Lecture

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The Stride

‘Just a little bit longer,’ she thought, ‘giving up now would be an insult to everything we’ve worked for’. Struggling to keep on her feet, Lieutenant Emeris Continued down the slim, dark hall deep within the cruiser. Its engine airways of large pipes and wires surrounded the walls, giving her a claustrophobic feeling. Steam from one of the vents startled her off balance and she struck the wall for support. Using the left side of her body to keep herself steady against the tunnel, Emeris looked again at the handgun in her right hand braced against her side as it shook in shock from the wound in her abdomen.
‘Almost there,’ she tried to encourage herself. Gingerly, the lieutenant shuffled herself slowly along the wall. She looked up, past her sweaty strands of loose hair, and saw a dim light softly pulsing yards ahead. Thinking it ironic that in the old wives tale one should never go to the light at the end of a tunnel in a near death situation, Emeris knew that that plan indeed was the one thing that could save her, or at least everyone else. She tried to call out to the radiance, but the breath in her lungs was spent all on keeping her steady and the words could not escape her mouth as loud as they rang in her head.
She could feel her few last steps as her body refused to rely under her control. The anger in her calves burned at her and soon became numb, making her fall to her knees. Emeris wished that her stomach would feel the same numbness almost as much as she wished that she could reach the end of the channel. Noticing now that her arms were her only hope, she checked the chamber of her gun to confirm that it was vacant and dropped it to the ground at her side. ‘So close,’ she pulled herself forward, fingers and knuckles straining to propel her weight forward, ‘so close,’ the light touched her face and blinded her eyes as they refused to adjust to their weakness, 'so,’ her own thoughts were muffled by the surprised remarks of the crew members inside the bridge, ‘close…’

“It’s the Lieutenant!” they shouted in her ear, “She brought back the signal for alarm!”

“For what? Read it then!”

“It’s the enemy; they’ve penetrated the cruiser from below! The captain is down there with the others, trapped in crossfire! Delta team, send a squad down there immediately!”

“Yes’ir!”

“Someone get on channel 4 and order emergency health care immediately!”

‘I made it,’ Emeris echoed in her head, ‘I made it, made it,’ and she drifted off into sleep.


Inspiration: "The Host" Novel.
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RED


Selected logs from the journal of Private 2nd Class, Fazrin Joshua on studies of the 2989 Juggernaut Alliance military conspiricy:

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Log 17.3.6

"It's check day, everyone's testing their fighters and firearms to ensure a prepared battle on planet 8, system 163. Today was the last day we could contact family, because the digital communicator signal interferes with the strategy navigation system that the capt. says we need on so that everything runs smoothly once we launch out. So, I called my older sister and I told her I'd call her in a few days when the attack was over. She told me that she bought a new, fuzzy, cute present for me when I returned named "Private". We joked around about how it got the rank "private" nearly 100 times faster than I did."

Log 17.3.9

"In about an hour, I'll be suiting up and we'll be launching out. Capt. says that the raid should only take a day or two due to the primative research of the defending planet. If their army is so weak, then why did they bomb us? They must've known they didn't have a chance after we'd retaliate; so what was the point? I often wonder what their real objective was. The IPMs they sent were a design we were unfamiliar with. They were large, heavy, and bulk. Guessing by their research, we determined that they're most likely outdated and that's why we had trouble identifying the type of missile. Another thing to help us figure out how old they probably were was the fire power. Their affective diameter only spread about 300 miles and had a fatality rate of only 60%. Wish me luck, it's time to fly!"

Log 17.4.1

"Captain was right, the battle was an easy win. I secured the air boundry above Geoff's team while they raided a few labs in the area we were assigned to. I asked capt. why the we'd raid labs with research years behind our own, his reply was " 'cuz it's regulation, private! Now eat yer rations!" "

Log 17.4.6

"Everyone's pissed, including me. The bridge won't turn the digital signals for the phones back on. They won't even tell us why. Even the captain is ticked off because his wife is sick back home. I asked him if he knew what was going on and he said, "the damn higher-ups got cocky and bit more than they could chew!". Don't know what he meant by that...."

Log 17.4.8

"It's been a week and even communication with the other ships has been cut off. I went looking for the captain, but he was nowhere to be found. Geoff, my roommate, said he heard a rumor he'd been accused of treason by release of classified information. Was it what he said to me the other day?"

Log 17.5.1

"Info's been leaking around...lots of rumors. Someone overheard the bridge comm device while on-shift up there. Seems other ships have been having health problems...a virus broke out or something. No big deal, we have planety of medicinal supplies on board."

~*~*~*~*~

"I asked Geoff what exactly he found in the research lab he raided. He told me he wasn't allowed to say much about it, but it was mostly just plants - lots of them - like a greenhouse. They loaded up most of them in the battleships."

Log 17.5.3

"The virus breakout was a lot worse than we thought...it doesn't hurt you or kill you, it causes severe amnesia and increases the output of hormones in your system. The bridge says it's no big deal, but the snitch from upstairs says that over half the fleet is gone...the virus turned them against eachother."

Log 17.5.9

"We're the last ones, 4 days away from home. Geoff and I are fine, but a lot of people are missing. I think they've been quarantined by order of the bridge. Or worse...thrown out."

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"Geoff hacked a signal from downstairs in the intel room so I could call my sister and tell her what's happening and that hopefully I'll be home soon, but I can't remember her number..."

Log 17.6.1

"I don't want to tell anybody, I don't want to be thrown out, but I'm starting to forget little things like names and locations of rooms on the ship. I wonder if my sister and everyone else back home is okay...I think the IPMs might have had something to do with this odd research that planet was doing..."

Log 17.6.2

"I'm seeing things, or maybe just one thing: red. Lots of red. It's so hot I can't think straight, I'm taking the day off to take a nap."

~*~*~*~*~

"I just woke up and Geoff is dead. Not killed...torn apart. I thought it was a dream, but the blood on my suit said otherwise. Red. I'll leave this journal here as my regret for my actions to his family, friends, and team. I'm sorry I couldn't say this in person, but I can feel myself getting worse....red. I have to end it or I'll endanger the other crew members on-board. Red. I'd say my goodbyes but I can't remember if i have anyone to say goodybye to. I'm not a monster, I was tricked by the bridge. They knew this would happen. To anyone who finds this, give them justice. Red."

Inspiration: Resident Evil 5. :lol:
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Working on two more at the moment. I've edited the stories at the bottom, you can see where I got my inspiration from.

PS - Should I sticky this?
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sticking your own work hmmm...let me see the other 2 to determine.The first one was great I found the second in all honesty very lacking of anything and the third was pretty good.
Gale points:ummm to far behind to care and too long since I got one to remember
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I think if you asked others to contribute (make sure it is well written mind) their own short Zorg stories, it could be a nice sticky.
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When people ask me plz because it's shorter than please, i feel inclined to respond no because it's shorter than yes...

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Dr_triad3 wrote:sticking your own work hmmm...
Yeah, that's why I asked. I'm not trying to be conceited, just thought since it's going to be updated regularly and is game-related (like I mentioned the "ZE Newsletter), didn't know if it looked bad or not.
Dr_triad3 wrote:I found the second in all honesty very lacking of anything and the third was pretty good.
Aw damn, that's my favorite ;). It's not deep, and isn't supposed to be so that the reader can use more imagination instead of me shoving literal tools down someone's throat, lol. That's why it's so descriptive. Tons of imagery because, as you can see, all 3 have a different "feel".
Istalris wrote:I think if you asked others to contribute (make sure it is well written mind) their own short Zorg stories, it could be a nice sticky.
I thought of that, but they'd have to PM me it before I posted it up. I'd a pick "winner" or so every few days to post. Good idea?
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