Zorg Empire

Well, I have been making numberous art creations for a while now and finally, came out with a really good one.

Here it is.
Completely drawn, no pictures taken from anywhere else.

I hope you like it!

I would love to see art by other people too!

sorry all my art is hard copy but I will be the critique though.

great balance and contrast.excellent transitions.great repition and varition.though the massive amount of space in the work more takes away from the center than it does frame it.Add some subrdinate elements and this could be a real master piece!

overall rating 7/10

It's great, reminds me of something I've seen before that uses the same structure of art, just a totally different picture.

I give it an 8.7/10 Why? Because I see all of the red lines at the bottom half of the picture, yet there is no trace of red in the top part, where the yellow is twisted together.

Dr_triad3 wrote:sorry all my art is hard copy but I will be the critique though.

great balance and contrast.excellent transitions.great repition and varition.though the massive amount of space in the work more takes away from the center than it does frame it.Add some subrdinate elements and this could be a real master piece!

overall rating 7/10

Yah... I realized that there was some extra space at the bottom after I had already finished it...

acewoonder wrote:It's great, reminds me of something I've seen before that uses the same structure of art, just a totally different picture.

I give it an 8.7/10 Why? Because I see all of the red lines at the bottom half of the picture, yet there is no trace of red in the top part, where the yellow is twisted together.

I don't know why I put only yellow on the top half of the tree... The origanal copy actually contained blue at the roots too, but i deleted that because it just didn't seem right...

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I am currently working on another picture and I will add it as soon as I am done, to see what everyone thinks. I greatly apprecitate the comments and suggestions.

I'd show mine, but they're massive.

Resize them a bit?

http://img641.imageshack.us/img641/4808/greenskull.jpg
http://img526.imageshack.us/img526/3558 ... thogen.jpg
http://img704.imageshack.us/img704/4007/neondino.jpg

Here are three of some of my better works.

The third one is rather stylish.

Yeah, it's my favorite

Those are awesome!!! They make great Desktop backgrounds. I hope you don't mind that i used them.