Ok I got some ideas from a book so I need you guys to help me get an A+ so that It's gonna be printed in the whole campus. Here's an extract. I'm feeling there's something missing so I need you guys to help me out Thank you!

Carrying my staff i went into the kitchen and picked up my empty sack. It was almost dark so I got to keep moving. As I walked out of the kitchen I saw Alice copying a book from my master. Her face glows in the glimmering candle. When she looked at me her smile suddenly faded. " Aint no need for you to be doing that Tom!", she protested. " Well I'm gonna Collect a few eggs and some county cheese, there's barely food left to keep us for a week". "well if your going then let me come with you" , Alice's face suddenly turned red. " Since the fiends out in this world even you cant help me escape even if you come with me, So I'm going alone!" . Suddenly my master came out and said, " Alice is right Tom, The fiend is in this world already and the county is at war so it's now a dangerous place to go!"

Well I dont know what to think of next so I need your help guys!
F.Y.I. The characters. . . .
Dont mind it just yet. I'm gonna tell you who they are as soon as I finish my story.

Ok. My book is finished!!!
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